The Woman I Deserve 13

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Toyosi had accompanied PA on that month’s hangout with his teens to observe and take notes. Idara her friend had come along with her camera. She really just wanted to be in close proximity of both of them to assess the potential of the relationship. This was especially important as she sensed that Toyosi was working up courage to send her packing.

In the bus they had shared with screaming teens, she and Toyosi shared a glance that spoke volumes.

Are we sure we are up to two hours of this?

PA insisted that everyone park their car in church and join the bus. In that way, the adults were able to converse with the teens and form relationships with them. He had been sitting with Ovie at the back, laughing occasionally while Ovie held a group of teenage boys spellbound with his account of his adventures as a teen. Toyosi wished she had the courage to go and sit beside him but she had to play it cool. She, Ama and Idara were sitting with a mixed group who were telling Ama about a scandal in their school. Apparently, a teacher had accepted a bribe to alter the scores of a student in that term’s exams and had been caught.

The story bored her. She was there for PA and PA alone. Fidgeting with the strap of her prada bag, her mind worked furiously, trying to come up with a strategy. Ama suddenly smiled at her and patted her knee. They locked gazes silently.

Maybe this is the ally I need! Thank you, Jesus. I have been working on Ovie not discerning my destiny helper. Forgive me, Lord.


Zina was on the phone with Ovie. He had requested some software from her the week before. She had sent an assistant to deliver it but there had been a mix up and he got the wrong one. She then promised to deliver it herself to make up for the error.

“I’ll be home all day. Come in after work or whenever. Thank you so much,” he said as the call ended.

She decided to stop at the hair salon and get her hair styled since the next day was a Sunday. Ima had hounded her on grooming so much that she now heard her voice in her head like a microchip. Each time she wanted to go out without make up or dressed down or with her hair disheveled, that voice quipped in her subconscious.

What? Don’t you know that no man knoweth the day nor the hour when the Son of man will show up?

Zina chuckled as she parked her car. She had given her driver the day off because she wanted to get used to driving in Lagos. Ovie had assured her that his house was very easy to find so she wasn’t worried. At the salon, she requested a simple touch-up. They offered her a pedicure and manicure but she laughed them off. She usually did her nails by herself at home because she just had no patience to sit for hours being pampered. Besides, she loved to work on her laptop while her hair was styled but doing a manicure would not allow that.

Flimsy excuses, she knew but she clung stubbornly to some of her ‘tomboyishness’ that Imaobong was desperately trying to hack away. Even though she enjoyed the admiring glances she received, a part of her wanted to remain anonymous. From her teenage, she had always wished she could fade into the woodwork. She wanted to be recognized for her brains and talents but men could not see beyond her face and curves. In the middle of a serious conversation, she would turn to find the man she was talking to staring at her breasts or something and she would feel so disappointed.

After giving her life to Christ at 16, she began to wear darker, loose clothing, so as not to be a ‘temptation’ but that didn’t keep male attention at bay. She had had to fight off more than one ‘brother’ who she had trusted before she clammed up totally. Now, she was being coerced to bloom again, to accept compliments without making a disparaging remark, to blush without turning away, to bat her eyelids when a man stared at her rather than glare at him. Ima was the mistress of seduction and though she had an unwilling student, she was unrelenting.

An hour later, Zina was on her way to PA’s house. It was easy enough to find. She was let in when she told the security men who she was there to see. The house was at the end of the drive in a quiet estate not too far from the church. She parked outside the gate, took out her bag and locked the car. Then she rang the bell.

A uniformed guard let her in. Apparently, they were expecting her. He pointed out the door to her and left her to walk there alone. She was almost at the door when she was distracted by a voice. It was coming from a chair in a quiet spot to the right of the door. Some potted plants were shielding it so she could not make out who was in it. Concluding it was Ovie, she sneaked behind the chair, reached out from behind and covered the eyes of the man in the chair with both her hands.









47 thoughts on “The Woman I Deserve 13

    blogaddict said:
    May 27, 2016 at 8:03 am

    Dr N of liiiiiifffffffeeeeee!
    Yes this is dramatic enough #Teamdramaqueens.

    tosin said:
    May 27, 2016 at 8:22 am

    Awwww, this is getting more interesting. Thanks Dr N.

    adaeze said:
    May 27, 2016 at 9:03 am

    Noooooo!!!!! Dr N! Do you want to give me cardiac confarction abi malfunction?

      drnsmusings responded:
      May 27, 2016 at 2:35 pm

      Cardiac conglomerate. Lol

    smilinggurl said:
    May 27, 2016 at 9:07 am

    Ooh la la la la, Ooh la la la. I love where this is going. Haha haha.

    DamiLoves said:
    May 27, 2016 at 10:57 am

    Dr N!! Just like that, please don’t give some of us an arrhythmia Ooh!!
    We will be waiting eagerly for the next instalment!
    Sons of the Sun

    Grace Gigi said:
    May 27, 2016 at 11:54 am

    Ha! She went covering the eyes of who? Dum dum ke. This is getting very interesting.
    Double Denim

    nehemastories said:
    May 27, 2016 at 1:11 pm

    Dr N…chaaaaaai!!! This is the place you choose to end ?

      drnsmusings responded:
      May 27, 2016 at 2:40 pm

      Yes! *sticks tongue out!*

    TemiTee said:
    May 27, 2016 at 2:20 pm

    Seriously?!!! A cliffhanger after the innumerable page refresh?!!!!!!!
    Dr N, Thank you but please come and finish o. Biko, E jo, Abeg.

    Cynthia Chinazor said:
    May 27, 2016 at 2:52 pm

    Let me guess…it wasn’t Ovie #amebo

    Fola said:
    May 27, 2016 at 4:57 pm

    Ghen ghen…..some past ish about to unravel(?)

    Nice one Doc.

    graceabsite said:
    May 27, 2016 at 6:05 pm

    Captivating story, Dr. N but I scrolled after reading that Zina covered someone’s eyes. Only to find out the episode is finished.
    In fact, I didn’t know whether to shout or cry.
    Pity us some more next time o!

      drnsmusings responded:
      May 28, 2016 at 7:34 am

      Una bin dey complain sey e too long na 😛

        teekay said:
        May 29, 2016 at 11:54 am

        Too long ke? No o! Please assume you never read such complaints and keep giving us longer episodes. Happy Sunday!

    D'Dream said:
    May 27, 2016 at 6:23 pm

    😩😩😩😧😦😦😦 why nah? The story go just end just like that? Come back and finish this thing ooo 😀😀😀.

    From inside source I was intimated that the person whose eyes she covered was Pastor Odion! Yay!

      E' said:
      May 27, 2016 at 6:27 pm

      Lol d’dream pls share ur inside source with me. I almost cried at the end. Eish!!! Ok Dr n pls let it be PA plsss. Oh he’s at that teen thing. Hiss. Well done Dr. N. GOD BLESS you for giving us good clean healthy drama….😙😙😙😙😙i look fwd to the next

        drnsmusings responded:
        May 28, 2016 at 7:35 am


        E' said:
        May 31, 2016 at 11:40 pm

        Yaaaay i guessed right. It was PA💃💃💃💃💃💃💃

      drnsmusings responded:
      May 28, 2016 at 7:35 am

      Lol. Inside source ko

        D'Dream said:
        May 28, 2016 at 10:23 am


    Hope N said:
    May 27, 2016 at 6:26 pm

    Oh! My!! God!!! This is the moment we’ve all been waiting for. Why do you have to stop here naaaaaa? Please Ma bring the next ASAP.

      drnsmusings responded:
      May 28, 2016 at 7:36 am


    Eyak said:
    May 27, 2016 at 7:08 pm

    Finally they meet! Can’t wait for the rest of the story.

    Tamie said:
    May 27, 2016 at 7:33 pm

    Just like that?
    Dr N nauuuuu, it was too short and cut just when the story was beginning .

    exceptionalstar said:
    May 27, 2016 at 7:52 pm


    Oye said:
    May 28, 2016 at 8:57 am

    Maybe this is the ally I need! Thank you, Jesus. I have been working on Ovie not discerning my destiny helper. Forgive me, Lord. lol @destiny helper. Good read Dr N.

    Frances Okoro said:
    May 28, 2016 at 9:57 am

    Havent been commenting cuz my phone doesnt allow me to do that on ohh, don’t know what the issue is..anyway, reading this with lappy so I can comment..yay!!

    but kai!
    Dr do this one oh, short and just a teaser.
    I’m following and waiting..compensate us with quick one to join up biko.
    Thank you!

    Jedidah said:
    May 28, 2016 at 2:33 pm

    This is going somewhere good! The suspense sha 😞
    Well done doc.

    Tia said:
    May 28, 2016 at 8:39 pm

    We will not complain again. PROMISE
    Its not too short oh, its just perfect

    Abeg no do this kain tin again
    who could this be gosh cos P.A don waka go teen group abi?

    Waiting for how my lovestory would be written

    Sue said:
    May 29, 2016 at 2:31 pm

    Choi! It is well oh……Next one, pls Dr N

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